They say sticks and stones break bones
But it felt like every single one of the 206 bones in my body shattered when you abandoned me.
I wasn’t just hurt.
I experienced the kind of pain that grips your heart like a boa constrictor,
Pushing against your ribs and causing them to snap into fragments that pierce your lungs,
Preventing you from taking a single breath without sobbing.
I gave you my life.
My baby days, youthful weeks and adult years.
I gifted you my voice.
Even as I screamed over and over again.
They say pain comes before pleasure
But you pleasured me into thinking the pain wasn’t there.
I handed you my emotions.
Every laughter and tear,
Anger and fear was yours.
I couldn’t even sigh without worrying whether you were happy.
I treated you to my innocence.
My purity and pride were all I could boast of yet you convinced me to dish them out on silvered plates of sin.
I placed a tall glass filled with my destiny in your hands, served in your favourite way;
Ice-cold like your frozen heart.
Only for you to feast and have your fill of what was rightfully mine.
You seized and drained me, down to the final, solitary drop which you licked up gleefully.
Stiff as a board, light as a feather,
I float up into the air, painlessly suffering.
Is that a light I see or a reflection of the shiny, empty husk I call my soul?
They say, they say.
But what they say may be as far from the truth as night and day.
Whether the light is the brightness of Heaven, or the fiery pits of Hell,
I can only pray that:
‘Lord, into your hands do I commit my spirit.’
Naa, thank you so much for sharing your poem with me. I’ve published it at The Skeptic’s Kaddish here –
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/02/25/in-your-hands-or-out-of-mine/
Sincerely,
David
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Thank you too, David!
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The imagery
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You knowwww
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Thank youuuuuuuuu
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This piece is so wonderful dear…… continue with your good work.
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Thank youuuuuu. yes pleaseee
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This is not an ordinary regular piece. This piece got me into it. I like the diction and choice of words. Like it’s just beautiful—the imagery so clear and real. It’s just beautiful 🥺😍🌹
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Awwwwwww! Thank you!
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Beautiful piece LamBo💙
I really enjoyed this piece; the deliberately chosen words painted images so vivid that I felt as though I was watching a movie.
Powerful 🔥
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Wow! Thanks be to God!!!
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Impressive work. Kept my emotions entangled, especially at the end. 👏💙🔥
Punish him in your next piece😂
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Ajeiii XD Yes please
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Great piece @ lamboooo
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Thank you so much!
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